Concept 31

1)
Source code, a walk to remember, insidious. Source code they go back in time trying to make the future better. A walk to remember a high school student falls in love with another high school student with cancer. Insidious a family loses their kid in another world and they have to save him from monsters and spirits trying to take over his body.

2)
He would be thankful for my help and will always be thankful

3)
A high school student wants to impress his high school crush but ends up making a big mistake doing drugs

Concept 30

Kelly
A. Kelly wants the "in" crowd to accept her
B. Kelly's geeky cousin would ruin her chances of being in the "in" crowd

Mother
A. Kelly's mother invited her Kelly's geeky cousin to spend the summer with her
B. Kelly's mother wants them to spend time together and get really close

Cousin
A. Kelly's cousin wants to bond more with her
B. Kelly's cousin wants to spend all summer with her

win/win
Kelly really enjoys hanging out with her cousin
Kelly realizes she doesn't need to try to be someone she's not

loss/loss
Kelly and her cousin don't get along at all, and her cousin ruins her reputation forever

win/loss
Kelly doesn't have everyone over but she has an amazing time with her cousin

3)
A high school student encounters a bad experience with drugs and ruins his chance with his high school crush.

Concept 29 Brainstorm

The parents are driving home from the party while their son is still cleaning up.

Intercut
The Dad calls his son
"hey son, were on the way home. Defrost the steak for me its in the freezer"
The kid starts to worry
"Ok dad see you guys soon"

He cleans up everything he can, grabbing everything stuffing them into a plastic bags to throw away.

Intercut
The parents are driving home.
"Do you think he's cleaning?"
"Haha i bet its a mess over there"

The kid rushes faster and faster, the house looks cleaner than usual sparkling in the sunlight

The parents pull up on the driveway, and knock on the door. The son opens it and lets them in, they're surprised and proud of their son.

Concept 28 Brainstormers

#2

2) Last year I had a birthday at my house
I had my family over and they brought food
A lot of my uncles and more family and close family friends came
My friends came over and we all hung out
More family and friends came and they start singing karaoke and drinking while me and my friends are hanging out upstairs
At the end I open my presents and say bye to everyone

Concept #27 #1

Thatcher should ask Linda the question over lunch at her favorite care. It private in a way, and she was trying to be alone for private time. He would have had a short sweet conversation to lead up to asking her. She is confused and doesn't know what to do, whether she should let him copy or let suffer the consequences of not doing his work. Even though she doesn't feel good about it, she helps him out.

2)Schreiber's Class.
Skit: A student in class throws a gum at another student, and only one person witnessed it. The foreign exchanged student saw it and didn't know what to do. If he should tell and suffer the consequences of being a "tattle teller". He didn't know what to do because he wanted to be accepted. He approached the victim and told her who threw the gum at her. The person who threw the gum from then bullied the foreign exchanged student.

3) I would like my short story to be at a school, house and the streets. All the events happen at those places.

Period 4 pilot 8

I really like the story and the conflict. Its very unique, everyone, including me, is writing about typical high school problems like pregnancy and drugs but i haven't heard a story about a teacher sexually harassing a student. I think its very creative. The format was perfect, grammar was good.

Groundhog day

The non linear structure was used by having the day repeat over and over. This is my favorite non linear movie we've seen in this class. I thought it was clever how they made the day repeat, and I loved the ending. I was thinking throughout the movie how they could end it, and they did a great job. I never saw it coming. I really enjoyed it.

Pilot script #4

I really liked this story. It was great and had my attention the whole time. The beginning wasn't boring so i really liked it. Its hard introducing characters without being a little boring but the they did a great job. The situation really had me into the story. I think the format is wrong, and theres a couple typos, but other than that everything was great. Great story :)))

Pilot script #3

I like the story, it started off interesting and it got more interesting. I like the use of damn and ass because its real life vocabulary but i think it was used too much. Its becoming really repetitive. Punctuation and grammar is good. Great story

Pilot Script Cheaters

A title would be nice. The format looks different, It should be in screenplay template. I think it would be nice to have a little introduction of the characters explaining how they are. It was a little confusing switching from person to person reading the text. I think it was a little slow, maybe a little humor or suspense.

Pilot Critique troubled life

I liked the story, I really like the how detailed it was and the teacher was very mean but i think it was reality because some teachers are like that. There were a couple of typos but other than that i thought it was good. I think the kids dialogue should be more like how kids talk, not as formal.

Run Lola Run/ Memento/ Citizen Kane

Run lola run

• Spoken in different language
• Non Linear
• action
• 3 different versions of the same time period

Memento

• Non linear
• action
• Flashbacks in chronological order

Citizen Kane

• Non linear
• drama
• From different perspectives

reflecting on psycho

It was very interesting watching an old school horror movie. Its probably the oldest scary movie I have seen and it was good. A little different from the movies we see today, for example the music is different. In newer movies its more quiet, and there is a sudden noise to scare the crowd. The story was great, I liked this movie.

Critique #1

I really like the story, and the conflict. Its a little confusing when you switch from mom to lauren. There are a couple spelling errors but other than that, I think you guys did a great job.